Thursday, August 13, 2009

"Silly Caucasian Girl Likes To Play With Samurai Swords" - 2nd Draft

"I've always been told that I would one day encounter the likes of you, the infamous black mamba", Regina's voice echoed throughout the pitch black isolated environment. "Little girl, I know you feel you must protect your father. But I beg you, walk away", Beatrix suggested. "You call that begging? You can beg better than that." Regina giggled girlishly.

"What's this switch?" Karen asked, as she tried to hide comfortably with Cady and Gretchen in the confined space which hid them from Regina and Beatrix.

"What the hell, how did the lights come on?! I never thought you three would actually rain on my parade on this day of all days. Never mind I'll deal with you twits right after I get rid of this retard." Regina exclaimed, as she glared right at the girls hiding behind the glass wall.

As Beatrix raised her sword ready for battle, Regina waited for her at the top of a thick gym rope, one of 10 which hung 2 metres apart. Regina held a rare 'Hattori Hanzu' samurai sword, completely identical to that in Beatrix's grip. Beatrix moved toward the nearest rope and ascended until she was 2 ropes away and leveled with her opponent.

They lunged one rope forward and began attacking with rapid piercing force which caused them to shift back and forth in a swinging motion. Half an hour passed and as the action intensified, the 17 year old's cheerleader physique quickly became tired and she grew desperate. She jumped from rope to rope in an attempt to kill time while she provoked her opponent. Beatrix grew tired of this and dived forward in an effort to finish the job once and for all. Regina finally turned back to face her and they leaped towards each other and screamed at the top of their lungs. Then the lights suddenly went out.

"Fucking hell Karen!", Regina cried, followed by a scream which accompanied her from the top as her body shot straight toward a pile of javelins.  Beatrix managed to just grab onto the end of a rope, saving her from the fall which claimed Regina. "Okay... that is so... not... fetch", Cady, Gretchen and Karen whispered amongst themselves as they quietly crept out the door traumatised.

Beatrix approached Regina to find that three javelins had penetrated her heart leaving her sprawled with gushing blood loss. The teen queen had a few minutes left of life and she had a final request which Beatrix accepted. "When you find Bill please give this ring back to him, he told me it belonged to my mother", Regina's last words as she trailed off into silence. The woman sat there motionless and stared at her ring she once believed was lost.

A tear trickled down her cheek.

2 comments:

  1. Whoa great twist in the end there. Love the action writing. Youve crossed these two stories well with each other. Good stuff.

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  2. Thanks, I've touched it up in my final fan fiction and tightened everything up so that it fits better.

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