The plastics' ringleader Regina George made her way around the school throwing copies of the 'burn book' pages under every classroom door and into every locker. Students merged into the halls as the bell rang. To their shock there were A4 sheets scattered across the floors filled with the deepest darkest secrets of every student. This only resulted in a great display of uncontrollable violence as each student engaged in mortal combat with one another.
"What the hell?" Cady said as she stood in the middle of the long stretch of a hall with Karen and Gretchen completely oblivious to the situation. They turned to their right and standing proud was the queen bee herself smiling away at the hell she unleashed upon the school.
The doors on the opposite end slid open as Beatrix made her calm unnoticed entrance. With her eyes fixed on Regina she travelled toward her, taking no notice of the brawl in the background. Passing the other 3 'Plastics', Beatrix could feel something strange about them as they watched her closely but she chose to ignore them.
"Who is this lady? Her outfit is so fetch... Or maybe not" Gretchen mentioned, just to end up with a weird look from the other two. "I have no idea but lets follow her", Cady suggested as they subtly tagged along right behind her.
Beatrix reached her target and Regina became uneasy, while at the same time she raised her guard. "Its amazing, I knew who you were the instant I spotted that golden blond hair from afar. The spitting image of your father, where is he?", Beatrix asked. "Excuse me old retard? I don't know who you are but you'd better beat it before I order your wrinkles to swallow up your face", Regina shot back. "I don't have time for games foolish little girl. You know exactly where Bill is and I need to know now!" she exclaimed, bringing the background noise to an immediate pause as everybody stared, wondering what was going on. Regina threw 4 smoke bombs forward and raced out the door in an attempt to get away, leaving Cady and the other two confused as to how she had those on her. Beatrix followed her to the old abandoned soundproof gym, followed by the other 'Plastics' who were the only ones to make it out of the smokey environment in time to spot where the girls disappeared to.
Heavy rusted doors opened which appeared to have been sealed off about a decade. Dull, gloomy and icy chills rushed down Beatrix's spine as she crossed the threshold.
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I love the way you've placed such a serious situation in with the immature teen world of Mean Girls. Interesting twist you've thrown in there with Bill being reginas father. Look forward to seeing more.
ReplyDeleteThanks, my brain's out of order at the moment but I'm working on adding more. Anyone else reading this, please add any ideas you think may fit in with this story. I won't beat you up straight away so please feel free to let me know.
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ReplyDeleteCan't say I've seen either Kill Bill or Mean Girls so I'm not expecting to understand this completely haha. Sound like some interesting choices to mash together though.
ReplyDeleteJust an idea, maybe put each piece of dialogue from a new character on a new line, if you know what I mean?
Thought that the second sentence was a bit long/needed some punctuation, but perhaps that's just me.
Aaand, the last paragraph looks like its shifted to the present-tense, unless you intended that, in which case disregard this :p
Lookin forward to the rest :>
You're right, the 2nd sentence does need to change so I'll be cutting that up. Thanks for letting me know about the last paragraph, my brain went into sleep-i-don't-care mode so I'll be fixing that up too.
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